Azalais (azalaisdep) wrote in tolkien_weekly,

Ailments challenge, Nausea - Beneath the Bitter Rain

Author: Azalais
Title: Beneath the Bitter Rain
Source: LoTR Appendix B
Character: OFC (Wood-elf of Mirkwood)
Rating: PG
Warning: aftermath of battle
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Beneath the Bitter Rain

Fire's always meant warmth, fellowship, safety; the First-Fruits feast, the great bonfires of mettarë.  Now the bitter stink of rain-soaked ashes, charred oak and blackened elm, makes Erynneth clench her jaw on a wave of nausea. She stumbles over bodies of Orcs – and Wood-elves.

She remembers screams, shouts, a thousand arrows whistling, the crackle of flame. Hand-to-hand blades when her last quiver was spent.  Blood's sticky in her hair and her head's splitting. When at last she wanders dazed back into the Elven-King's hold, she can only stare blankly at the gate-guards who insist that it's over; that they won.


“The realm of Thranduil was invaded, and there was battle under the trees and great ruin of fire” –  LoTR Appendix B
Tags: author: azalaisdep, challenge: ailments: nausea, character: ofc
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